This week for literacy we had cross country. It was really fun I enjoy running. next time when we have it again my goal is to come 1st or 2 or 3. we had to run around the the bloke and around the fled it was fun and i can not wat for next year.
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Hi Kash, this is a fantastic piece of writing. I really like how you have chosen to write it in the form of a newspaper article rather than a recount.Maybe next time you could record yourself reading it so it iis like a tv or radio report. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHello Kash this is Lorenzo from Owairaka school. I really liked your story about cross country and how you told us about what it came in and what it said about Grey main and how they did not stop running and I love a good run non stop If you would like to see or check out my blog just look down and you will see it blog you later
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