Friday 17 June 2016

show not tall

    This week Miss P read as a story about show not tall it is so fun i like  it so mach in this story we had to          rite haw we fell it is cool i hope you like it we had to strike trow the words that have a different meaning

         

3 comments:

  1. Hi Kash.
    I think that your blog post was good but next time you could check your spelling because it was kind of hard to understand. How did you think about what to write for show not tell?
    Yours Sincerely.
    Sam.

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  2. Hi Kash
    i like your blog cod you make fix your spelling and make the work smaller i like the rest abort it. how long can you do writing

    Sincerely Felix

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  3. Hi kash
    I like how you have done a mistake then you put a line throw it
    next time you should fix your spelling mistake.

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